SUMMARY: Despite being married, Christie finds herself attracted to her new neighbor and friend, Melissa. As it turns out, the feeling is mutual.

COMMENTARY: This story sizzles, or at least it did for me. The author does a number of things that I believe contribute to making it well above average. In particular, the plotting and the pacing are very well handled. The story isn't rushed nor is it too drawn out. The author drops little hints of possibilities of things to come in such a manner that when I read it I found myself quite aroused. I like Christie and Melissa. Even though they are aroused by one another, they hold back on revealing their feelings for fear of what the other might think. The mounting tension between them is quite delicious.

If you don't care for stories of lesbian lust then you may want to skip this one, but otherwise I cannot find anything objectionable in this story. I highly recommend giving it a try.

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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