SUMMARY: Jack, 26 and fresh out of law school, is stuck at a Christmas party that he really doesn't want to be at. The hostess asks him to look after Sarah, her 16-year-old daughter.

COMMENTARY: I found this story to be both well written and arousing. I enjoyed the narration and the approach that the author takes. He draws the story out and does not rush things, despite its length. The only negative thing I can think of, to say about this story, is that there are quite a few typographical errors.

I would not refer to this story as romantic, but at the same time there is some give and take between Jack and Sarah. I this that this story should appeal to most of you, male and female alike.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 3/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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