SUMMARY: Its Christmas and Kristina is at a ski resort with her sister, Amanda, and her brother-in-law, Will. Unfortunately, Kristina isn't a very good skier. Fortunately for her, her heart is set on more than just learning how to ski. That's where a ski instructor named Nick enters the picture and...

COMMENTARY: I enjoyed this story quite a bit. I like the manner in which the author builds it up. I like the characters, in particular Kristina. She seems very realistic, primarily because she experiences conflicting emotions. That says a lot about her. It says even more to me about the author's ability. I also enjoyed the dialogue, especially the conversations between Kristina and Amanda. I think that most of you should enjoy this story.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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