SUMMARY: Jack just graduated high school and is still a virgin. He desperately wants to lose his cherry. Based upon information provided by one of his friends, he is hopeful that his sister's wedding will put his girlfriend "in the mood". Unfortunately, things don't work out quite the way he had planned. Jack's girlfriend is a no-show, although she does have a reasonable excuse, and he gets paired up, at the reception, with Tina, one of his new brother-in-law's older cousins.

COMMENTARY: Great story. I love the part that takes place at the dance. It is entirely possible that I am biased towards this sort of story, i.e. older woman initiates younger man, but I still think that there is much more to it than just sex. The author does a very nice job building the story up, so don't be fooled by the first few paragraphs, because as I just said there is much more to it than just sex. The scene that the title refers to is priceless. I enjoyed the dialogue and the characters. The plot is very nicely paced. I think that this story should appeal to most.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 4/5
• Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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