SUMMARY: Danny's wife, Denise, works for a very powerful man, Mr. Chase. Her boss wants her to become his mistress and bear his children. The catch is that she wants to remain married to Danny. Mr. Chase complicates things by agreeing to financially support the couple and the children. What will Danny decide to do?

COMMENTARY: This is an interesting story, to say the least. The opportunity that is presented to Denise and Danny isn't exactly run-of-the-mill, and that's putting it mildly. For the first two-thirds of the story I found myself both disturbed and aroused by Danny's situation. While reading the last one-third, I felt more comfortable identifying with Danny and much more comfortable with the level of arousal that I achieved.

On the whole, this story is different. If you are looking for something romantic, you might want to look elsewhere. There are elements within this story that I believe will appeal to some female readers and elements that will appeal to some male readers. I can also see how some men and women could be turned off by this story. It is a bit convoluted, but it works.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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