SUMMARY: A submissive woman is punished by her mistress.

COMMENTARY: This story flows beautifully. As I read it, I could feel the tension building within me. The main character is torn between dread (at what her mistress has in store for her) and joy (at the thought of being treated in such a manner by her mistress). These emotions and came through very clearly, and while they are conflicting they also made her seem very real. The ending is divine. It doesn't completely resolve everything, but it does leave the reader with plenty to wonder about.

For those of you who may get squicked by some bondage and discipline stories, let me assure that there is nothing very extreme in this story, other than the main character's emotions. Maybe I should have just coded it 'Light Bondage', but I chose not to.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Outstanding

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