Rogue Review No. 444 - October 4, 1999

  
 

TITLE:

Sheer Luck

AUTHOR:

Motion Man

LENGTH:

6,200 words

MAIN CHARACTER:

Male

COMBINATION(S):

Twosome (Female, Male)

ORIENTATION(S):

Heterosexual (Female, Male)

RELATIONSHIP(S):

Classmates (University)

KINK(S):

--

SETTING(S):

Home

GENRE(S):

--

CAUTION(S):

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SUMMARY: Jason didn't care much for his 'stuck-up' lab partner, Rita, until one day...

COMMENTARY: This is a well written piece. It is a bit too soft and romantic for my tastes, but the author has obviously put some effort into it. The sex is somewhat arousing. My real gripe with the story is that there doesn't seem to be much (if any) conflict in it. Everything goes too smoothly.

If you like soft, gooey, romantic stories then you may like this one. Personally, I prefer stories where the characters have to struggle a little more.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.5 (out of 10)

  • Arousal: 3/5
  • Editing: 5/5
  • Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

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