SUMMARY: Pami gets off, the Fantasy Train that is, in England, 1461. She meets Edward IV, and given the sort of story that this is, things progress from there.

COMMENTARY: Two things stand out about this story. The first is that it is a historical piece. Pami, with the aid of the Fantasy Train, has traveled back through time and space to England in the year 1461. She points out some of the distinguishing characteristics of her surroundings, although historical research does not seem to be the reason for her trip.

The other thing that struck me about this story was the hot sex. I'm not too sure what else to say other than I found myself extremely aroused by the fun Pami has with King Edward. Another way of putting this might be that I had a hard time restraining myself from doing more than just reading the story.

If the characters or plot had been a little more involved then I might have given this story higher marks. On the other hand, this is still a well written story, it is just that if you are looking for something deep or philosophical then you might be disappointed. Did I mention that the sex was hot?

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 3/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S):

• The King and I - Part 1 (of 1)
• Fantasy Train