SUMMARY: Bruce stays with Janice and Harold, his sister and her husband, while he is away from home on business. One thing leads to another...

COMMENTARY: This is a very well written and extremely arousing story. The author does a nice job of not cutting to the chase too fast. The tension builds over a series of close encounters between Bruce and Janice, until eventually something does happen. Another thing that I like about this story is the dialogue. It reveals things both explicitly and implicitly. I also enjoyed the narrator's sarcastic tone.

Of course, if you don't care for stories of incest then this may not be for you. In my opinion, you won't find too many incest stories that are written much better than this one.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 10.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Outstanding

LINK(S):

• Bruce - Part 1 (of 1)