SUMMARY: A woman and man explore their relationship by playing a dominance and submission game, in which he submits to her whims.

COMMENTARY: The author does a nice job setting the scene and a wonderful job following through. The story isn't overloaded with details. The ones that are included, are more than enough to fire the imagination of the reader, so that she or he may fill in the details. It would have been nice if there was a bit more to the story. By that I mean a little more detail on the characters or a little more to the plot. The amount of sex is well suited to a story of this length.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Outstanding

LINK(S):

• New Beginnings - Part 1 (of 1)