SUMMARY: Melissa and Chris have been friends all their lives, but never lovers. Something happens to change that at the same time that her brother is getting married.

COMMENTARY: This is a very well written story. It is nicely plotted and nicely paced. There is much more to it than just sex. If you are looking for stroke fiction, then I recommend you look elsewhere.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

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• Miss Behavin's Bedtime Stories