SUMMARY: Travis and Claire cannot afford to go on another vacation. Claire's desire to do so coupled with her promise to do "anything" he wants, sways Travis' assessment of their financial situation.

COMMENTARY: This is a wonderful story. The author paints just enough of the picture so that the reader knows what is going on, but not so much so that it feels bogged down in details. The sex is extremely hot, although I must admit that it is similar to fantasies I have had. I have no complaints. One thing to keep in mind is that the story is told from Travis' point of view, which is to say that Claire is not as fleshed out as her husband is.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Outstanding

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• a.k.a. nolan's stories