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Title |
Forty-five Words |
Author |
Miss Behavin' |
Length |
17,000 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (Female, Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Married Couple Unmarried Couple |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Home On the Town Outdoors |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Kate wishes her sex life was a bit more like her best friend Julie's. With some assistance and advice from Julie, her wish comes true. |
Commentary |
I think that what makes this story special is the fact that it does not feel predictable in the least bit. The characters seem real. They are not stereotypes. They have feelings. The author does a nice job putting the reader inside the head of each of the four principal players, to varying degrees. The plot has twists and turns. Everything does not go as planned. Sometimes this is because one of the characters change their mind and sometimes it is due to circumstances beyond their control. I can't think of anything else to say. Look folks, it all (characters and plot) works and it is extremely arousing. Need I say more? |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
10.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Outstanding |
Author's |
Miss Behavin's Bedtime Stories |