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Title |
The Garden |
Author |
E. Z. Riter |
Length |
2,900 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (Female, Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
-- |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Home |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Jack gets some help in the garden and elsewhere from Beth, his 21-year-old stepdaughter's best friend. |
Commentary |
This is a very nicely written story. In particular,
I enjoyed the descriptions. They are lush and sensual. The
author includes just the right amount of detail. This allows the
reader to fill in the rest with her or his own imagination. The only other thing that occurs to me is that there aren't any graphic descriptions of sex in this story. That will probably turn some of you off and others of you on. I found the story to be somewhat arousing. |
Arousal |
3 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
8.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Very Good |
ASSM Link(s) |
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Google.com |
Part 1 (of 1) |