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Title |
Christmas with the Andersons |
Author |
J. Boswell |
Length |
30,100 words |
Main Character |
? |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) Threesome (1 Female, 2 Males) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) Homosexual (Female) |
Relationship(s) |
Employer-Employee Fellow Employees Older Female-Younger Male Student-Coach |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Home Office School |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
2 Semi-Consensual Scenes |
Summary |
Bobby comes home after his first semester in college. He is horny and has a hard time keeping his eyes off Amanda and Laurie, respectively his sister and mother. Bobby doesn't know it but both his parents are augmenting the sex they get from each other by having sex with some of the people they work with. Bobby also knows nothing of his sister's extracurricular activities, which include taking showers with her basketball coach and sleeping with the father of two children that she baby- sits. Bobby remains horny until Christmas Eve when he finally screws his neighbor, and then her daughter. |
Commentary |
The way I have described this story it may seem that
Bobby is the main character. Considering how much the focus
shifts during the story I would be hard pressed to justify that
statement. I think that the author tries to do just a bit too much with this story. It starts off at a reasonable pace. The focus seems to be Bobby, but then it shifts to Laurie. Later, it shifts to Amanda. The author also spends some time focusing on the activities of Robert, Sr. Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with shifting the focus among a group of characters. I do however have a problem with the focus shifts in this story because there seems to be little rhyme or reason to them. This story should have been broken down into a few shorter ones, or expanded to the point that it becomes clearer how the various episodes are interrelated. I did find the story arousing, for the most part. There are a couple scenes that made me cringe. One involves Laurie being forced to do something she does not seem to want to do. The other involves Bobby feeling up his sister after she passes out. Neither of these scenes last very long, but the fact that they are part of the story may deter some people from reading this it. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
3 out of 5 |
Objective |
8.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Good |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 4) Part 2 (of 4) Part 3 (of 4) Part 4 (of 4) |