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Title |
Good Samaritan |
Author |
Ann Douglas |
Length |
6,700 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Older Female-Younger Male |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Home |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
A teenage college student, Ryan, helps out a 49-year-old waitress, Dalia, after her car breaks down. Later that night Dalia returns the favor. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. The author takes
things at a nice pace and does not rush them. She shows rather
tells the reader that is transpiring between Dalia and Ryan. The
descriptions focus on how the characters are feeling as well as
what they are experiencing. This is a very well written story. As I mentioned earlier, it flows nicely. It is simple in its design, but rich in detail. The characters seem realistic, although Dalia's life is fleshed out in a little more detail and thus she seems more complete than Ryan. One of the wrinkles that impressed me is how Dalia changes between the beginning and the end of the story. When it starts she is disparaging her coworkers for giving into their libidinous desires. When it ends she has given into the same sort of desire. The fact that she doesn't just change on a whim, but goes through a period of uncertainty makes this seem more realistic. I really enjoyed this story. I was aroused (Very Arousing) and impressed by the writing (Very Well Written). I have always found the older female-younger male fantasy an attractive one and so am not completely surprised that I enjoyed this story. On the other hand I think I also enjoyed this story because the author has done a wonderful job putting it together. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
9.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Excellent |
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