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Title |
A Moving Experience |
Author |
Jenny Wanshel |
Length |
8,500 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Adult Female-Teenage Male |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Home |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Jenny needs some help moving in to her new place. The help she gets, Will, is about to graduate from high school. One thing leads to another and before you know it... |
Commentary |
This is an extremely arousing story. Jenny takes her
time and allows the story to unfold. There isn't an abundance of
sex, but to perfectly honest I found the build up to the sex a
bit more arousing than the sex itself. This is a well written story. The plot flows nicely. The characters seem realistic enough. Jenny is more vivid than Will, possibly because the story is told from her perspective. The author also does a very nice job with both the dialogue and Jenny's internal monologue. There are a number of lines that made me chuckle or brought a smile to my face. The only negative thing I can think of to say about this story is that it is about sex and nothing else; in other words it is a stroke story. Wow, I really enjoyed this story. It is well written and extremely arousing. I wish all stroke fiction was this well written. I highly recommend that you read this story. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
4 out of 5 |
Objective |
9.5 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Outstanding |
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