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Title |
Bonnie McBride |
Author |
Sidney Durham |
Length |
9,100 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Adult Female-Teenage Male |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Home |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
The year is 1961. Billy is getting ready to take off for college. Before he goes he decides to take one last stab at losing his virginity. Bonnie McBride is supposed to be an easy lay, so Billy sneaks into her house and... |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. The author does a
nice job drawing out the sex. It wasn't predictable and there
is a nice mix of physical and verbal interaction between Billy
and Bonnie. This is a well written story. The plot doesn't seem to flow, but the characters make up for that. Both Bonnie and Billy have a realistic feel to them. They both have desires and fears. They both express doubts. They both let themselves get caught up in the moment. The plot is another matter. The beginning is a bit weird. It seems out of place, unless the author is either (a) trying to show how Billy changes, or (b) mislead the reader as to the true nature of the story. The rest of the story is about Billy and Bonnie interacting, and what they actually do seems secondary. I enjoyed this story. It is well written and very arousing. I am afraid that I may have marked it down, in part, because the author's intentions were unclear to me. I have given it a Very Good. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
4 out of 5 |
Objective |
8.5 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Very Good |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |