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Title |
Next Door |
Author |
Looney |
Length |
13,200 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) Twosome (2 Females) Group (Females, Males) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) Homosexual (Female) |
Relationship(s) |
Infidelity Neighbors |
Kink(s) |
Bondage & Discipline Sadomasochism Watersports |
Setting(s) |
Car Home On the Town |
Caution(s) |
Blackmail Humiliation |
Summary |
A man blackmails his neighbor, Sandy, into being his sex slave by showing her pictures he took of her screwing a delivery man. |
Commentary |
This is a somewhat arousing story. It is not
constant sex from the first paragraph, but its not too far from
that either. Stories that involve elements of domination and
submission can be quite arousing, but usually they are more
arousing when both characters are willing participants. It is apparent that the author has put forth some effort in writing this story. I have a problem or two with it. On the up side the story is reasonably well paced. On the down side the story doesn't seem to develop all that much. Each chapter basically consists of Sandy being forced to do things she does not want to do, by her neighbor. The author is somewhat successful in showing the reader how both Sandy and her tormentor are feeling. The world in which they live, unfortunately, did not seem very realistic. I am not wild about this story. It is somewhat arousing and the author has obviously put forth some effort, but it still does not suit my tastes. I don't usually care for stories that have humiliation and blackmail in them, this story was no exception. I also prefer stories that revolve around more than just sex. Unless you like stories that have non-consensual elements in them, I advise you skip this story. I have given it a Not Good. |
Arousal |
3 out of 5 |
Plot and |
3 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
7.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Not Good |
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