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Title

Bringing Home the Boss

Author

Lambchop

Length

3,700 words

Main Character

Female

Combination(s)

Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male)

Orientation(s)

Heterosexual (Female, Male)
Homosexual (Female)

Relationship(s)

Married Couple
Employer-Employee

Kink(s)

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Setting(s)

Home

Caution(s)

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Summary

Leslie has become a workaholic. John, her husband, has become a couch potato. Sharon, her boss, comes up with a plan to resolve her employee's marital problems.

Commentary

This is a rather direct story, but I still found myself aroused by it. The author does a great job showing the evolution of Leslie's feelings as she goes from despair to shock to arousal at the proposal her boss makes. This is a very arousing story.

This is a well paced story. It is obvious where the story is going from early on, but it is still a fun ride. The characters are more than adequate for this sort of story. Each was clearly defined and more than just a body. It would have been nice if there was a little more to the plot, but over all this is a well written story.

I enjoyed reading this story. It is both well written and very arousing. This is more of a male fantasy than a female one, so I may be somewhat biased. This is an Excellent story.

Arousal

4 out of 5

Plot and
Characters

4 out of 5

Editing

5 out of 5

Objective
Analysis

8.5 out of 10

Subjective
Analysis

Excellent

ASSM

Bringing Home the Boss

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Lambchop's Erotic Stories