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Title |
Theresa the Elder |
Author |
Al Steiner |
Story Code(s) |
m/F, Teen |
Length |
6,400 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Arousal Factor |
High |
Story Factor |
High |
Summary |
Mark helps Theresa, his older brother's girlfriend, take care of Greg, his older brother, after he has passed out drunk. This good deed does not go unrewarded. |
Commentary |
This story is about how Mark got to boink his
older brother's girlfriend. It is easy enough to
botch a story such as this. All you have to do
is begin the story with Mark and Theresa in
bed, or at the very least have them in the
sack by the beginning of the third sentence. I am happy to report that Mr. Steiner has taken a different approach. He lets the story develop on its own and does not seem to force it at all. The personalities of the characters seem plausible. The plot is well paced. The sex is arousing. |
ASSM Link(s) |
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