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Title |
Coaching the Coach |
Author |
Losgud |
Story Code(s) |
F/M |
Length |
7,200 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Arousal Factor |
Average |
Story Factor |
High |
Summary |
Linda's coach wants to fuck her. She gives him what he wants, but things don't go exactly as he planned. |
Commentary |
I really liked the first half of this story. I found
it extremely arousing. This was despite the
fact that there isn't any sex in it. The second
half was another story. From the outset it was clear that Linda doesn't really like her coach. It was not until she got him into her apartment that it became clear to me that she wasn't about to change her mind. So basically I went through the first half of the story thinking that if she is going to sleep with him, it must be because she wants to, and in a way I guess she did, but it wasn't for the sorts of reasons that I would hope she would want to. Put another way, her reasons for sleeping with him are anything but romantic. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |