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Title |
Stolen Moments |
Author |
Watcher |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
6,100 words |
Rating |
Outstanding |
Arousal Factor |
Low |
Story Factor |
Ultra |
Summary |
John falls for Barbara, a married woman and a client of the firm he works for. |
Commentary |
This is a very well written story. It is not
very arousing, but it does have it's
moments. For the most part it is about
what leads John to screw Barbara. John is
attracted to Barbara because she is a
beautiful woman, but the story is more
than just a matter of how to get her into
bed. John has some scruples, and some
business sense. He does not want to
wreck his own life just for a piece of ass. In
the end he makes a decision that costs
him, but John is not pollyannish. He knows
his actions have consequences. This is not a stroke story, but it is better than the overwhelming majority of the stories that can be found on ASSM. |
ASSM Link(s) |
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