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Title |
Helena |
Author |
E. Z. Riter |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, NC |
Length |
4,500 words |
Rating |
Grudgingly Good |
Arousal Factor |
Average |
Story Factor |
Average |
Summary |
Dan agrees to help a young couple work off their gambling debts by paying for the wife's services. |
Commentary |
I've got mixed feelings about this story. It is not my cup of tea. Regardless of whether Helena, deep down inside, was perfectly okay with working off her debts by sleeping with a complete stranger or not, for the most part this story made my skin crawl. I'll admit that I was aroused by the way Helena responded to Dan's commands, but at the same time I still was not over the feeling that something about this scenario was very wrong. Technically, it is well written. I just had a hard time identifying with either character. That made the story less enjoyable for me. |
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