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Coming In My Heart

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Summary

Cat meets Brian at the beach. They have fun that afternoon, with their clothes on. Cat contacts Brian a few days later. A couple days after that they go out on a date.

Commentary

This is a nice, light, romantic story. I like the characters and I think the author did a good job with the plot.

I would have liked the story better if not for the need for editing. There were many places where words were missing, or left uncapitalized.

This story is rough around the edges but, putting aside the rough edges, I like it a lot.

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