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Rachel's Curse (Chapters 1 - 5)

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Summary

Paul is dating Rachel. What Paul does not know is that because of a curse, Rachel exchanges bodies with whomever she has sexual contact with.

Commentary

The writing is a bit stilted and terse, but I like the pacing and the plot. I also like the subject matter. The author deals with the issue of sexual attraction after a sex-change, in a semi-serious sort of way. There is more to this story than just sex.

Even though these are only the first five chapters of a longer work, there is a certain amount of closure within them. I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

There are a number of missing words and grammatical errors in these five chapters. Hopefully the author will re-edit these chapters and repost them when he releases the final chapters.

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