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A Most Unusual Afternoon

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Summary

Darlene prepares a surprise for Bradley, her lover, only to find out that he has fallen for someone else.

Commentary

This story is a bit too mysterious for my tastes. The author builds up to a scene which ends up being somewhat anti-climactic. This is not a happy story. I was a bit aroused, at first, but did not find this story, on the whole, arousing. It is well written and well edited.

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