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Title

Bulls

Author

Lord Malinov

Story Code(s)

M/F

Length

1,600 words

Rating

Very Good

Summary

Rick tells Mark about what he did last night.

Commentary

This story is well written and arousing, but at the same time it is a bit confusing.

The majority of the story is dialogue. There are places where the conversation switches from one topic to the other, without any clear delineations. I find this distracting, at least in this case.

ASSM Link(s)

Part 1 (of 1)