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Title |
Summertime Blues |
Author |
Hawkeye |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
2,900 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
Sam and Lisa make some fireworks of their own on the 4th of July. |
Commentary |
I like the way the author partitioned off this story. The first part sets up the rest of story nicely. The characters seemed realistic, but not necessarily very deep. The plot is simple enough. The author's descriptions are what make this story worth the read. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |