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Title |
Coming In Last |
Author |
Sven the Elder |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
1,500 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
Sven and Kate have sex during a boat race. |
Commentary |
This story is short, but sweet. It is well paced. There is a
little bit of build up, before the sex. The character's are not very deep and there is not much to the plot, but I enjoyed this story thoroughly. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |