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Title |
Wager |
Author |
Alcibade |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, M/M/F |
Length |
13,900 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
After losing a game of Scrabble to his wife, Peter lets her call the shots for a while. |
Commentary |
The first one-third of the story was great. It was tense,
suspenseful, and arousing. The characters were not great,
but they seemed realistic. The last two-thirds of the story, unfortunately did not measure up. A new character is introduced, William, and boy is he a talker. He drones on and on. Peter's narration leads me to believe that he was not too terribly wild about William either. The author did such a good job with the first one-third of the story. I was shocked by the last two-thirds. The whole mood changed. The change was a horrible choice, in my opinion. |
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