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Title |
Gifts |
Author |
fcp |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
4,800 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
James and Donna expand their repertoire. |
Commentary |
I had trouble getting into the mood of this story. It seemed
kind of forced. I was not impressed with the dialogue or
the characters. The story was too straight forward and did not seem to have a particular feel or any nuances. It seemed too regimented. I only felt a spark or two of life within it, and that was not enough for me. I did enjoy the part where they get caught by George. |
ASSM |
Gifts |