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Title |
Saliva |
Author |
Hugo Alkaviade |
Story Code(s) |
M-solo, Teen |
Length |
2,500 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
Michael spends a day fantasizing about Christine, a girl who rejected his advances. He gets revenge on her by sneaking into the girl's locker room and beating off in her panties. |
Commentary |
This was a very well written story. The author has a nice
light touch. His descriptions are not always central to the
plot, but they do help to set the mood. He does not spend
too much time describing any one thing. The humor was
dry, and witty. I was a bit disturbed by this story. The narrator's feelings are not incomprehensible. His actions, on the other hand, are a bit over the edge. This is only a story, but it still gave me a creepy feeling. Despite my mixed feelings, well written but creepy, I liked this story. The author did not get into rape or torture, which it seems would be a logical expansion for some writers. I look forward to reading more by Mr. Alkaviade, but hopefully the tone will not always be the same. |
ASSM |
Saliva |