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Title |
Sordid Conception |
Author |
Chili Peeler |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, M/F/F, Inc |
Length |
30,300 words |
Rating |
8.0 |
Summary |
Brenda is 23. She has been married to Chris for a year. They have been trying to get her pregnant for some time with no success. Brenda goes to her widowed mother-in-law, Sharon, for advice. Sharon suggests that Brenda let Brad, Chris' 19-year-old brother, impregnate her, without telling Chris. Brenda agrees. What Brenda does not know is that Brad has been fucking his mother for the past eighteen months. |
Commentary |
This was an enjoyable story. The conversations and
asides were witty. The author got into the minds of the
three main characters. He did a decent job of showing
their apprehension at getting involved in the way they do.
There was a plot and there were breaks between the
sucking and fucking so that the plot could be advanced. This was not a great story, but I liked it. It qualifies as an "And They Lived Happily Ever After" story in my book. This is not a disastrous fact, but I cannot give it as high a rating as I would have other wise. Another factor which lowered my rating was the ratio of sex to plot. Neither of these facts lowered the rating all that much, because I did enjoy the story. |
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