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Title |
The Professor's Wife |
Author |
Billy G |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
7,600 words |
Rating |
9.5 |
Summary |
Doctor Burbank works at a university. His secretary, Judy, is having marital problems. He gives her a shoulder to cry on hoping she will want a cock to suck on. It turns out she does. |
Commentary |
Despite my description of it this is a lovely romantic story.
It is slow moving. The characters that end up in bed
together in the end do not begin the story together in bed
nor are they together in bed by the middle of the story. If all
you want is graphical depiction's of sex then read
something else. It is well written. The characters feel like real people with real problems. The setting also seems very real. The urges of the main characters do not seem too ridiculous, nor do their actions. The story is about more than sex. It is about people interacting. The only thing I would have liked is if this story had been longer; in the 15 to 20 thousand word range. Maybe Mr. G could have taken the time to flesh out the characters a little bit more. Maybe he could have shown us Judy's husband the history professor instead of just telling us about him. This story works fine at the length it is at, but I would have liked to have seen a little more of Judy, Doctor Burbank and the world they live in. I do not mean, necessarily, more scenes with them naked. |
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The Professor's Wife - Part 1 (of 1) |
| The Professor's Wife - Part 1 (of 1) |