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Your newest story captured it so well, that feeling of "I can't get close enough to you." I wish I could explain fully to you how much your story meant to me.
A very interesting posting concerning the second best moment during intercourse (imho). At first the sentenceless structure was difficult to comprehend. Then I reread it with greater concentration and I was taken by the imagery generated.
Obviously we do not think in sentences and this look into ones innermost thoughts works well without that artificial structure.
Excellent work. BTW, for my lover and I, the greatest moment during intercourse is when my lover achieves her climax as I approach mine and hold it back as she finishes. We feel most connected when that happens.
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