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I just finished "Clare's Cuming of Age" and I enjoyed it.  It was a wonderful story.  Thank you.  

 

Any suggestions for what story should follow?  

 

Thank you. 

Peter

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 I just finished reading your story Clare's cuming of age. It was amazing and written from a believable but very fucking sexy way. I enjoyed it several times lets say and will again. Probably next time with a voice reader to have both hands available. A lot of people got involved but in good ways to continue to ramp up the fucking of little ones an moms.. i really enjoyed the outcome of getting Dick out of the way and the twins what they deserve i guess. Thanks for posting and sharing it with others. If you have other stories I'd love to read them

M

 

Hey there Broadsword.

I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your stories.  I just finished reading "Clare's Cuming of Age” and was absolutely delighted by the story.  I'd certainly like to be in Bob's shoes or better yet, out of his shoes and into his situation.

This was a well thought out story and the pace was just right.  I noticed very few typos and your sentence structure was excellent.  Being fantasy, this is still a fairly believable tale.  Another thing is that your stories or novellas are nice and lengthy with fantastic character and plot development.  Every once in a while I like a fast paced, get right to it story, but for the most part I like the long, romantic type like what you write.  It's a shame that the Lolita Studios site is defunct.  The stories you produce would've been just right for that site.

I've also read "The Bird watcher" and "The Great Plague”, both of which I enjoyed very much. I would certainly like to be the main protagonist in your stories.  You have a great talent for writing and I look forward to reading the rest of your stories.

Thanks for the work and effort to write stories like this for me and others to read.  Have a great weekend!

 

HJ

 

PS.  I really liked the stack of crack sentence. That's was one I'd never heard of before, but I would certainly like to dip my wick in a stack of crack, especially that particular stack.  If only dreams could become reality.  (sigh)

 

WOW. I've never read any of your works but I intend to eventually read them all. 

 

Claire's Cuming of Age is fantastic. It was so hot that I couldn't even manage to get all the way through Chapter 5 before I was cuming. Even though you tell us what is going to transpire in the summary, it doesn't take anything away from the stories eroticism. I would suggest you make the summary a bit less and save more to the readers imagination. It won't hurt because the readers imagination is flying is short order. I stopped at 5. No sense in wasting a good read when you know there should be at least one or two more hot orgasm's in store. 

 

I really liked that Claire's mum gave Bob knockout drops for the weekend stay. That is right in line with my favorite genre, the mother being acquiescent and even a conspirator in the abuse of her daughter/s.  I can't wait to read more of this story but at my age, it will be at least a day or two till I recover sufficiently to thoroughly enjoy your story. 

Dear Broadsword,

Have just read the above-mentioned story and found it well written an literate (what a change from the mainly American crap).  It was also a very horny story, completely different from the usual run-of-the mill incest stories,

The only doubt I have is whether girls as young as seven would be penetratable.

If only I could have found young girls with agreeable mothers when I was younger!!

Thanks al lot - you put a lot of effort (in more ways than one) into that story.

Murray

I have just finished reading your story "Sally and Sue's Adventure" and I would like to tell you how much I enjoyed it !

Well written, nicely paced with some interesting twists. Lovely depictions of scenery and locations. Thoroughly enjoyed and hoping for a follow up. Thank you indeed.

              Corkscrew.

 Thank you for choices, one of the best written and stimulating stories I have ever read. I can only hope for more! IF IT COULD ONLY BE ILLUSTRATED?! Wishful thinking, I know. Thank you again!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARK

 

I had read most of Broadsword’s stories and sent him an email compliment when he thanked me and said be sure to read The Choices Club.   I had just finished The Bird Watcher and thought it was one of the best pieces of child erotica I have ever read.   I’ve been reading stories from asstr.org for many many years and Broadsword is up there with the best authors I have found.

 Choices Club is a ride and I hope you decided to spend the time to go along.   It starts out with some light blackmail that is not my favorite but very soon is filled with very willing participants.   The concept of the Club is brilliant and it forms a framework for so many different stories.  Leave your critical mind at the door.  Resist the temptation to think that couldn’t happen and just enjoy the story.   The way the club is founded, funded and prospers is a unique concept that I think you will love.  The level of detail is amazing.  Broadsword must have done extensive research in everything from Special Forces to Museums and Architecture.

 The love scenes between Sam and the head girl (read the story to find out what head girl means) are some of the most beautiful, erotic and loving scenes I have ever read.  It was very easy to put myself in Sam’s place in my mind.

 I used to think Renpet, Chris Hailey, and Tempest were the best authors on asstr.  I have definitely added Broadsword to that list.   Read The Choices Club.  You will love it.  Then go back and read the rest of his stories.  

Ducky

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Hi Broadsword,

 I am finishing up Choices Club and I absolutely love the story.  Looking forward to reading your other stories like Mike the Mechanic.

The biggest scare I had so far was when I couldn't connect to ASSTR because of an apparent DNS problem.  I was afraid that I wouldn't be able to finish the story after reading 1/2 of it. 

Just wanted to say thank you for writing.

 Andy

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Hi Broadsword

 

Just finished The Bird Watcher another great story, have read all you have written so far, like that they build not as a lot on here that rush ahead. Add me to the count for a follow on to The Bird Watcher

 

Cheers 

Luke

 

I just read and loved "The Bird Watcher".  It was a perfect story and a wonderful love story.

 

I do hope you have a part two that you are working on.  I would love to have more of Suzie's friends ... a sleepover would be fun.  I would also enjoy having Rachel – Suzie’s Mum, catch the two fucking.  She would be upset but then finally admit she had known all along.  I would love her to join in and there be some mommy and daughter incest. Maybe she could admit that that is why she was so distant.  Back when Suzie was five (or 4?) and mom stopped bathing her - she stopped because her daughter was turning her on and she was afraid she would hurt the girl.

 

My two cents.

 

I love your work.  Thanks again.

Peter

 I just finished reading your great little story.  I very much like your writing style and pace of the story.  I would like to recommend that you write a sequel.  The story begs to continue.  I further hope that you don't wait too long to write it.  It is best to strike while the iron is hot.  

Again, great story.  I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your works.

JimGee

Thank you so much for sharing.

The story and characters are well-developed as was my stroked cock-stand during reading..

 (I'm 75, in good health.. so the plumbing works.... with help from your GREAT STORY.

The characters were well-developed.. rather than the usual "her mother died and Uncle Joe was left to bring up his nubile niece.." kinda thing.

Keep up the good work , and stay healthy.

I have been an avid reader of your wonderful stories for the past month since we were bashed with complete lockdown in our country (Northern Europe). As English is not my prime language I still hope this email might find some common ground of understanding.

You have a singular way of expressing the erotic interaction between an adult and a child in the age-span of 7-11 t which I suspect inequitably causes a deep sexual arousal in most readers.

Hey brother. Thanks for alerting me to your new story. I had a blast reading it, pun intended. You certainly have a knack for the Dickensian names - Mr. Swallowtail indeed :)

 Have to say that this was a departure from your usual style and I found myself missing your world-building plotlines a bit. I also found Harry a sweeter personality than your typical leading blokes - no manipulation, coercion, and outright taking the hole of his choice - and a departure from the central character who walks into your stories fully formed and carrying out his machinations for girlie tail. Though I could see the need for Harry to be as such as he is coming out of a long self-imposed sexual hibernation. Harry and Suzie are both dipping their feet in the water, so to speak, and your handling of it spoke well of your attempt to write outside your comfort zones.

 I can see how you matched two wounded souls together and their affinity for another felt well-earned. I can also see how this story probably grew beyond your original goals graduating for a short story to a genuine novella. You've certainly earned a pat on your back for germinating this sweet slice of literature simply out of a slightly out of focus picture of an adorable ginger.

 Where it fell short for me, though, was the distant horizon that Harry and Suzie set themselves up for. The cohabitation stretched credulity as this time your character didn't manipulate the mother to have his way with her little charge. The elements regarding the mother and her throuple seemed like extraneous decoration. Certainly, I saw where you were setting up a situation where all secrets are exposed (and possibly you were setting up the sequel?). I felt this story would have been better served by a relatively short and lurid relationship in which Harry and Suzie open worlds for each other; she by exposing Harry to the core element of his sexuality hidden from even himself; he by offering Suzie companionship and connection that's been absent from her life since her father departed and also by leveraging his skills to vastly improve her life with regards to her school situation. Perhaps they would have thusly parted tearfully in this version of the story, but I think they would have done so knowing of the brighter horizons ahead for themselves and each other.

 I also missed the love em and leave em scenarios of your previous stories. New girl, hot sex, plot, another new girl, hot sex, plot and so on. I think you excel at those types of plots, the ones that play a little like the classic Bonds. The harem Harry accrues at the end of The Bird Watcher (but only gently prods rather than nastily penetrates) only served to punctuate how the central plot could have been broken up along the way with hot girlie action unrelated to the dynamic between Harry and Suzie, but then I suppose we're talking a full-on  Broadsword tale rather than the short story this was meant to be.

 Congratulations, though, on honing your tools and adding some new ones to the work-shed. I'm certainly glad ASSTR isn't broken for good (the downtime had me nervous) and I have a venue for all things Broadsword.

 Best,

Brand

Hey Broadsword,

Really enjoyed Bird Watcher, fun read. From where you left off there's an open door to a lot of fun.

Sirtink

All I can say is wow. This story had me hooked from the beginning.  Wonderfully well written. I especially enjoyed the ruination of the gang of ten. As well as the magnificent seven at Harry's home. 

I am most intrigued by a sequel. If it is half as good as this one, I am in.

Thanks again,

Lance.

hi i like your story so very much for your hot fantasy and the cool descriptions.

i would like if you describe more the lil tits and reactions in orgasm, the smell and the girl juices.

there could be some with first hairs too

waiting for more ! ty

Hi,

I’ve just finished the first six chapters.

Amazingly arousing!

I’ll come back for a full review once I’m finished (in multiple meaning)

Tom

Another amazing story!! I would love to read more of Harry and Suzie's life and adventures going forward. Especially since you put in the snippet of Rachel noticing her daughter's vaginal state, and the interactions between Suzie and Harry.

I didn't write before but since I'm here now, Choices was magnificent. Now that I'm writing to you and thinking of the two stories and their similarities... As a reader of course I want more more more... But as a writer you have your own vision from the start and maybe the rest of Suzie's life is up to our (the reader's) own imagination.

What ever you decide, I thank you for your work!!

I look forward to reading your next piece.

Cliff 

Hi B, I read a bit more of the story today, and I LOVE the banter between Suzie and Harry! Chapter 3 was an absolute treat. I love Suzie's assertiveness, and Harry's caution, it's a great dynamic. 

As far as I'm concerned, you're at or near the pinnacle of this literary realm

Hi BS

 Another really excellent story. I love the way it unfolds, with new characters introduced throughout and, of course, the finely detailed descriptions of the intimate activities and events. And you clearly know a lot about birds as well!!

On the storyline front, these are the bits I particularly enjoyed:

Chap 2: the first peeking into her panties (and, of course, the pussy joke)

Chap 3: Harry's first view of her 'great tits'

Chap 4: Suzie's back story / Harry's second venture into her panties and his first touch of her pussy/Suzie's first orgasm/and best of all, Harry licking her sweet little pussy (I do so love to lick pussy)

Chap 6: the revenge plot

Chap 7: Suzie's Harry/Daddy dichotomy

Chap 8: the events in the swimming pool showers (and the great idea that Suzie wanted to watch and feel the reaction of Harry's cock rather than watch the video ) / the first mention of Suzie getting a spanking (I do enjoy administering a good spanking)

Chap 9: the discussion about what Ellie would be doing with Felicity's dad, particularly the fact that she'd be paid and the headmaster never paid his own daughter when he fucked her / the very arousing idea of a ten year old girl having sex with both the headmaster and his wife (would have loved to be a fly on the wall for that)  / the blackmail (and it's positive intentions)

Chap 12/13: the unfolding events with Suzie's mum

Chap 14: Suzie's meeting with Jo and her offer to help Harry get into her panties

Chap 16:he initiation ceremony for The Magnificent Seven (the idea of preteen girls licking each others assbuds, clits and pussies is such a turn-on!!)

Chap 17: Harry fingering the six girls' pussies one after the other - YUMM.

 

Great stuff throughout - many thanks for sharing! Will reciprocate as soon as I get the chance.

 Best

 J

I liked it. It varied from the framework you have used in other stories, so this was a fresh approach.

 Very nice.

 Art

Reading your stories can best be described as an avalanche.  Once started, there is no stopping.

Kind regards, Al

Dude!

 

I barely made it to the story at all after first seeing the photo. Then It was a beating heart until Liz called and Anna spoke to her while Steve worked his magic on her from behind. Damn! I got it all over my desk and lap. Some hit the keyboard, but nowhere damaging.

 

This is going to take a long, careful read. It's very well written and I look forward to reading more of your work.

 

This is making me incredibly hungry.

 

Thank you.

 

Oxford

So I'm on part 5, I had to go back and skim the end of Birdwatcher. I didn't remember his night with Tamara. That's because you hadn't written it yet.

Really enjoying the new work! I had to stop and message because the beginning of 5 is brilliant and totally got me. 

They swim and then they're on the couch. Then he's undressing them.... And I stopped, reread the last paragraph. I was like "shit he messed up"  I read two more lines and was like "wow' he got me"

 

Great read so far!! Was wondering... How would I go about meeting Harry and Steve?...... LMAO

 

Anyway, wanted to say hey. Hope life's good for you. And I do enjoy your work!

 

Overall a very good story.   I can’t say it measures up to the Birdwatcher or The Allotment but it didn’t need to.  This one was all about the sex.   Not a lot of story or plot but great writing.  The ending was interesting.  A little like the Choices Club ending.  Nothing wrong with some fantasy.  It was a really nice touch to have Helene show up at the end.   If only that could happen in real life. 

 

   "Mr. B, I really enjoyed modeling for you.   I’m 12 now and my mom doesn’t know I’m here.   Would you take my picture? I don’t mind letting you see me naked.  ".  Ha ha. If only…….

 

Dear Broadsword

 

I read "The Pact" on ASSTR.org.

Great story, I loved it.

Thanks for sharing it with us!

 

Cheers

Chris

 

 The Girl with the Flaxen Hair              BACK

 

Broadsword has written another gem, or actually a Silver-Gem of a story.   In this depressing time when it seems like Covid will never release its stranglehold on our lives Broadsword has given us a story of hope, deep love and joyous preteen sex.   The Girl With The Flaxen Hair is not a quick fap story.   It’s a story of hope for the world, a travelogue of the English countryside, a story of two broken young girls saved by an unlikely combination of adults and an example of how the hottest sex can come from love as well as passion.

 

The story develops slowly with complex characters destined to change each other’s lives. It’s full of sexy humor, which makes the characters more believable. The tender moments with Mary will bring a tear to many reader’s eye, while the bedroom scenes will match the hottest scenes of Broadsword’s other writings.

 

If you liked The Choices Club and The Birdwatcher you should love The Girl With The Flaxen Hair.  If you only liked The Pact then this story might not be for you.

 

 

 

Just finished "The Girl with the Flaxen Hair" wonderful story. I looked up canal boats, never knew they existed, looks like a great way to relax and see the countryside! Keep up the good work, looking forward to "Tiny Tim, the Time Traveler”.

 

Sir Tink

 

Fantastic! The detail is extraordinary.

 

Checkout 86

 

An absolutely wonderful piece of work. Enjoyed it thoroughly ! It has a great story line,a cast of interesting characters and an educational bent that I also enjoyed. Made me want to run out and buy a canal boat......which is probably not a great decision in December,here in Canada ! Thank you for sharing your talent and have a wonderful Holiday Season.

 

Corkscrew

 

 

Broadsword,

 

In my humble opinion this is your best work so far. I have read all your stories, minus choices club ( haven’t undertaken that task yet), and enjoyed them all to some degree. However, your latest effort was exceptional. My one minor criticism would be the last paragraph actually took something away from the story and didn’t add to it.

 

Although your preferred fantasy age range is lower than mine I still enjoy your stories. They are well written, creative, and hold my attention throughout. Keep up the good work. Thank you for sharing your stories.

 

Mike

 

Just read "The Girl with the Flaxen Hair".  Simply superb.

Kind regards, A

 

 

This is by far your most touching, topical and riveting read so far.

I am a big fan, having read everything on your website but now confess to never having commented previously.

I love how you have woven a story from two beautiful pieces of music and the current global situation - if only it could be done!

I’m a big fan too of the canal network and follow a number of vlogs of narrowboaters.

Here is a lovely series of vids from a beautiful couple of ladies showing the whole of the Llangollen, should any of your readers be interested. Sadly this channel has ceased publication.

 

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLtcxxL1T-UINYhTqfs6NO9UnNy7S2ipOK

 

JimM

 

 

 

 

The Girl with the Flaxen Hair is now my favorite story. Almost perfect. Thank you. I love Gem and Silver.

P.N.

 

 

My dearest “Broadsword”,

I’ve just finished “The girl with the Flaxen Hair.”!

 

Thank you for your wonderful contribution!

 

I’ll say it again:

Wonderful language and soo sensitive intrigue!

 

Your description of “unconventional” love actually made me shed emotional tears several times in its enamoured context! The underdog perspective of, primarily, Mary was a description of pure love from all parts. Even if I got sexually aroused my main perception lies in the realistically described romance! Has it been a book it had been a page turner! You should actually write a real “feel good” novel!

 

Having such veiled desires as I have (and as I understand, you do as well) it was hard not to share my emotions during the reading with my wife.

 

Thank you once again! You are a person I would like to meet irl.

 

Yours sincerely!

//Tom

 

Wow!

 

A couple of quick thoughts.

 

I like that Jim has known all along what his preferences are with regard to girls. He's never acted on it but relieves himself with porn. I can identify with this though, I have only read the porn, never seen or watched it.

 

A couple of scenes with Mary being sad got me choked up. This is the last thing I would expect from a porn story. Excellent.

 

I have only reached the part where Jim and the girls go to bed for the first time. Erotic and hot as hell. But then when Jim pulls Ariana back from his chest and places her over his face...shot my load. The image of that young pussy lowering towards a waiting tongue was so intense. And the flavour! Ye gods, it would be heavenly.

 

Thank you. I'm eager to get further into the story once I recharge my batteries and build up another load to eat.

 

Oxford.

 

 

 

An absolutely wonderful piece of work. Enjoyed it thoroughly ! It has a great story line,a cast of interesting characters and an educational bent that I also enjoyed. Made me want to run out and buy a canal boat......which is probably not a great decision in December,here in Canada ! Thank you for sharing your talent and have a wonderful Holiday Season.

          Corkscrew.

 

I'm not one to reply to story authors, but your story "The Girl with the Flaxen Hair" was one of the best stories I've ever read. I read every word and enjoyed it very much. Very well done sir, and Thank You for sharing it with us.

 

Respectfully,

 

Jsta_Rebel..

 

Passion of Dale – The Roses of Picardy

Dear Broadsword 

 

As you know I am a big fan and have read every one of your stories, parts of some several times.  As much as I love your earlier works I think The girl with the Flaxen Hair is your second best work.  Sorry, how could anything ever beat Choices?  Since you have only released part 1 of Passion of Dale I will wait until the remaining parts are released before comparing it to Flaxen.   Of course there is no need to rank them.  All of your stories are wonderful.

 

I am amazed at how you can keep coming up with fresh ideas after all the topics you have covered.  The Rose of Picarty takes us in a completely different direction from Flaxen.   Instead of the hope of a bright future you take us to some dark days of war but as always, you find love and kindness and steaming hot sex in those dark days.   

 

Dale is a wonderful complex character.   Loving and protective of his family but willing to die for his country and seeking out fleeting pleasure in a war time setting.  The balance of home and war settings took some getting used to but really showed the contrast between the two and each section was long enough to draw the reader into the characters.  The only negative is that by releasing it in three parts you will have many frustrated readers waiting for parts 2 and 3.   Part 1 is excellent and I will be looking for a notice that parts 2 and 3 are posted.

 

Ducky

 

 

Mike the Mechanic series.   

 

Two words, Golden Lotion, show what a fantastic story teller Broadsword is.   One of the biggest challenges in this type of story is making it believable.   8 year old girls do not seduce men in the real world and they report men who molest them.   So many stories ignore that fact.   Through the concept of the Golden Lotion Broadsword gives us a very believable reason for the girls to get beyond their initial instincts and once they experience the joys of sex it’s not a stretch to think they would want more.

 

For anyone just discovering Broadsword this is a great series.   Broadsword is the Tom Clancy of child erotica.  Definitely read the series in order since each book builds on the previous book.  I like the way Mike is such a complex character.  He has no problem drugging and gently raping an 8 year old girl but will turn around and help her mother turn her life around.  Of course access to her daughters is usually part of the deal.  Broadsword has a way of making it completely believable that mom would not only agree but join in the fun.

 

The sex is off the charts.  Whether it’s Sammy next door who loves him or a starving girl in Minsk or an 8 year old prostitute in training in Russia Mike leaves them all begging for more.   The beach in Book three and the pool party in book five will compete for your vote as the hottest parts of the series.

 

 

I thoroughly enjoyed the Mike series and I’m sure I will reread it many times.   I also appreciate how Broadsword welcomes feedback and responds to emails between writing the next steamy story.

 

Hello there, 

 

I just finished reading your story "Mike the Mechanic - Part 1" and wanted to tell you it was some of the best erotic literature I have read in a long time. The characters were fantastic - believable, relatable, and incredibly sensual. What I would give to have one day alone with Sammy!

A few of my favorite aspects of the story:

- Your descriptions of the feelings and sensations of being with a girl were perfect. From the first time you "accidentally" rest your hand on her butt, to the first time you get to taste her and feel her with your tongue, to the first time you get to carefully and slowly take her ass. They were so spot on and brought up many happy thoughts and memories!

- The background of having him take increasingly naughty pictures, pushing her limits and expanding her boundaries set the stage and tension nicely. Sammy's age and description were so wonderful to the story, and her awaking to the touching and photos were perfect.

- It was so wonderful to read accurate, detailed descriptions of how a girl's body reacts to the many firsts in the stories, it made if feel like I was the lucky guy. 

I have been tending to reading more non-con content recently, so this was a much needed break. Your work was a very pleasant surprise and led to a wonderful morning! 

Great work!

 

ARKANDCM

Mike the Mechanic - Book 6 –The Walking Holiday or Love in a Very Cold Climate         BACK

Bollocks off!

Hi Broadsword. I immensely enjoyed the final Mike. Sorry that I haven't been able to reply sooner with my feedback - things were hectic for the last few weeks.

To start with, what a great and funny payoff for the Bollockov wordplay you've been setting up for quite a while! I admit I had reservations when it appeared that the bulk of the book was going to be a slow-simmering affair between Mike and Nessy, especially as I was really enjoying the love em and leave em setups you had Mike navigate thus far in this book. However, you navigated the tension between setup, action, payoff and believable character development quite well. Hats off as you've clearly surpassed your best work thus far in this regards. My only complaint was that the length of the tent and seduction section had me missing the "quickies" you had Mike enjoy earlier in the book. I think future longer segments like this would benefit with breaks from the central characters to side characters advancing the plot elsewhere. This is where you could have Mike's (or your next series lead's) fellow protagonists and his antagonists engaging in erotic setups with the little ladies.

To your credit, you did do that in this book with the action diverted to Sergei's crew and I thought the setup with the hidden pictures featuring the sisters and cousins with Sergei's man and Sergei himself foreshadowed more such scenes in this book. However, those later scenes didn't have much erotic payoff. I believe the book could have benefited from a less sadistic Sergei (some sadistic is good), as his wanton killing without him or his men enjoying the little fruit at their disposal seemed like a wasted opportunity. I mean "enjoying" in the sense that you would write them as if you were trying to provoke the same response from your readers as you do when you write the erotic scenes between Mike and his girls. We already have a morally ambiguous universe in which Mike constantly rapes girls he has rendered unconscious. I think it would fit your universe to have the "bad guys" enjoying girls in the same ways Mike's actions seem morally justified to himself - perhaps a little harder than Mike, as they are the baddies ;) You have to appreciate that the bad guys don't think of themselves as such. Don't think too harshly of my criticism in this regard; you've set up a fantastic world and I can't help but think that this little change here or a tweak there (all well within your demonstrably apt skills) would only improve your works. Believe me, I would never waste my time giving out tips on how to beautify a garbage dump!

Back to the story, great denouement to the Mike saga (so far). Although I couldn't help but wonder whether Mike walked away from his version of paradise by not relocating to Ivana's dacha! Imagine enjoying an ever-rotating catch-of-the-day! Perhaps he might have used his skillset to send Ivana's son off to make himself the king of the lion den. Perhaps with the stability of the presence of Alex, Katrin, and Nessy in this alternate scenario. I quite enjoyed the "such is life" apathy of Ivana, Tatiana, and Valentina to the pleasures Mike sought from their girls (what a fantastic tableau as Ivana came to place the breakfast and took in the scene of Nessy's ass and legs coming out from under the blanket over Mike's face as her head bobbed on his groin!) Of course, cajoling and entrapping women to get access their girls has its own pleasures, but I'm glad that you skipped that element in this story as you had so much other ground to cover. I'm hoping for more of that in your time travel adventures, as that casual relationship to age and sex through time would be divorced from our modern realities.

This is getting quite long. Please consider the length and breadth of this critique my apology for not getting back to you sooner regarding this work. Hats off to you, my friend, for giving us the Mike saga. It truly is a singular work in our type of erotica. Best of luck to you in all endeavors in 2021!

Best,

Brand

Dear Broadsword,

 

After reading stories from many different authors I think what sets you apart from 99% of Preteen erotic fiction authors is your locations.   Too many stories take place in a single house or single neighborhood.   What makes your stories special is the way you take us to exotic locations with complete detail so that the location becomes an integral part of the story.  Whether it’s the border between Ukraine and Russia (an extremely topical subject now), a Spanish beach where it’s accepted for young girls to play and swim naked, a typical British small village, the British canal system that I’m sure very few people know exists, or the battlefields of WW1 France, you take the reader on a new adventure with each story.

 

Of course it goes without saying that the stories built around each setting are lovingly detailed, believable and extremely erotic.   Your research is impeccable.  Your characters complex and the stories are built around love more than anything else.   It’s a winning combination and I hope you keep writing for many years to come.

 

Ducky

 

 

Sir,

I would like to congratulate you for your skills in writing erotic fiction about young girls and older men. I found your novels a few days ago and it was a nice erotic present for Christmas. Your stories have flair and build up a believable atmosphere of erotic tension between the girls and men. Very stimulating to read and stuff that inspires my improper fantasies about girls. Now the subject is one that we should not speak loudly about, but there is an erotic dimension that is stimulating. So I wish you a creative and erotic Christmas hoping you will get ideas and inspiration for your next story! Stay safe!

A well-wisher who loves girls:)

Trident