SUMMARY: Rob and Ashley are married and have the hots for one another. The problem is that Rob is married to Lisa, and Ashley is married to Chad.

COMMENTARY: The author does a nice job building up to the sex. He doesn't rush the story. He shows how Rob and Ashley get to the point that they are willing to cheat on their spouses. That's what I liked about this story.

On the down side, this story has a disjointed feel to it. It doesn't flow very well. Rob and Ashley both voice doubts over being unfaithful, but it seemed as though they were saying these things simply because those are the words that the author wanted them to say, not because they truly felt that way. For that matter, I didn't get the feeling that they cared all that much about their spouses in the first place. That's what I didn't like.

I think that I would have enjoyed this story much more if I had actually believed that Ashley and Rob cared for their spouses' feelings.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 3/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 3/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

LINK(S):

• No Regrets - Part 1 of 1