SUMMARY: While on a business trip, Mike get the hots for Tiffany, a hooker.

COMMENTARY: I'm not too crazy about this story. It is divided into three parts. I liked the first part more than the second. I liked the second part more than third. What I liked about the first part is that it was very arousing and flowed nicely. I liked the interaction between Mike and Tiffany. I liked the narration. The situation seemed realistic, and at the same time fantastic. After the first part, the characters became less interesting. Their actions seemed more mechanical. They didn't seem to have life in them. The sex wasn't as arousing. I didn't find the sex in the third part arousing at all. The story does have a logical flow to it, but the author dragged out some parts that did not need to be dragged out. In a sense the story became too predictable. I'm not too sure what else to say. I think what kept me reading, considering the length of this story, was the hope that it would stop getting worse and start getting better.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 3/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 3/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S):

• The Hots for a Hooker [ASSM Archive]
• Part 1 of 3
• Part 2 of 3
• Part 3 of 3