Rogue Review No. 421 - August 5, 1999

  
 
TITLE:Early In, Early Out
AUTHOR:Titmouse
LENGTH:3,500 words
MAIN CHARACTER:Male
COMBINATION(S):Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S):Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S):--
KINK(S):--
SETTING(S):Office
GENRE(S):--
CAUTION(S):--
  

SUMMARY: One good favor deserves another. The nameless narrator of this story offers to reduce the amount of time that Susan has to work in his office, if she does him a favor in return. He isn't specific, but Susan comes up with a favor that they both are agreeable to.

COMMENTARY: The story is a little short on plot, but the author does a nice job setting it up. The sex is very arousing. This is a quickie, not a full blown story, but the author has done a very nice job with it.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

  • Arousal: 4/5
  • Editing: 5/5
  • Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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