Rogue Review No. 416 - July 22, 1999

  
 
TITLE:Losing It
AUTHOR:Titmouse
LENGTH:18,100 words
MAIN CHARACTER:Female
COMBINATION(S):Twosome (2 Females)
Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S):Heterosexual (Female, Male)
Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S):Friends
KINK(S):--
SETTING(S):Indoors
Outdoors
GENRE(S):--
CAUTION(S):--
  

SUMMARY: Marcee remembers how she finally lost it, her virginity that is.

COMMENTARY: This story is well put together, but it has a mechanical feel to it. What I mean by that is that I have no problem with the way the story is set up, but most of the descriptions seem to be more graphical than emotional. There are some scenes that I found arousing, but the story isn't overflowing with them. There are more scenes that have sex in them than there are scenes that turned me on.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 6.5 (out of 10)

  • Arousal: 2/5
  • Editing: 5/5
  • Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

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