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Getting Hubby's Attention
Eighteen and Innocent
3,700 words
Female
Solo (Female)
Twosome (Female, Male)
Heterosexual (Female, Male)
Married Couple
Toys
Home
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SUMMARY: Crystal isn't getting enough sex from her husband, so she does something about it.

COMMENTARY: This is a fun story. Its length definitely works in its favor. I say that because this is a stroke story, ergo, there isn't much to the plot. It revolves around Crystal getting her husband to perform.

I did like the main character. She seemed realistic to me. It is a shame that her husband isn't as fully fleshed out.

There is a bit more narration and a bit less dialogue than I like to see in a story. The paragraphs are also a bit long. They probably should have been chopped up into smaller ones.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 4/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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• Getting Hubby's Attention - Part 1 (of 1)