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Two Families - The Cruise
thor4u
40,300 words
Male
Twosome (Female, Male)
Heterosexual (Female, Male)
Father-Daughter
Mother-Son
Older Female-Younger Male
Stepbrother-Stepsister
Exhibitionism
At Sea
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SUMMARY: 14-year-old Jason Bradford goes on a cruise with his 37-year-old mother, his 19-year-old stepsister, and some of their friends. Through the course of the cruise Jason learns quite a bit about sex thanks to more than one older woman.

COMMENTARY: This is a rather long story. I do not recommend trying to read it in one sitting. I read it in three sittings, and probably could have stretched that to four or five.

Is this story arousing? Yes, it is piping hot. The author does a very nice job of not spending too much time describing the sex. There is at least as much build up and teasing in this story as their is sex.

The fact that some of the characters actually express doubts about committing incest was nice to see. It makes them seem more realistic. I wasn't as taken by the father-daughter relationship in this story, as I was by the others. That is probably because the author doesn't spend nearly as much time developing those two characters and their relationship, as he does the others.

On a different note, the story seems to end rather abruptly. I would prefer to have seen it end a bit more gradually.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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• Two Families - The Cruise - Part 1 (of 1)