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Title |
Dinner with Callie |
Author |
Edbun |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
7,600 words |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Story |
4 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
9 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Excellent |
Summary |
Callie lets Greg, her husband, in on something she has discovered. It involves butter and anal sex. |
Commentary |
This is an extremely arousing story. I'm not
too sure how healthy it is for a woman to
baste her pussy, inside and out, with
butter, but I found the description of it to
be very appealing. I think I was also turned
on by seeing Callie take charge of the
situation and not relying on Greg to initiate
sexual contact. This is a stroke story, but it is well written. The author gives enough background information about the couple to make them seem like more than just actors in a porn flick. The plot is well paced and seems to follow a logical progression. During the course of the story the author switches the point of view back and forth between Greg and Callie. I think this is done very effectively. I definitely enjoyed this one. It is well written and extremely arousing. I'll admit to at least one bias with this story. I usually enjoy stories that involve characters using food, whether that be bananas, butter or whatever else comes off the dining room table or out of the refrigerator, in the course of sex play. I still think this is one that most readers should enjoy. I give it an Excellent, under Subjective Analysis. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 2) Part 2 (of 2) |