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Title |
The Teaser |
Author |
Al Steiner |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
7,400 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Story |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
9 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Excellent |
Summary |
A man reflects on a fling he had with his next door neighbor, when he was in college. |
Commentary |
I found nothing arousing in the first third
of this story. The rest of the story is another
matter. The sex play in the final two-thirds
of the story is very arousing. The author
takes his time with it, and even when it was
obvious that something is going to happen
the author still managed to surprise me. This is an extremely well written story. The beginning of the story was not arousing in the least bit, but I still found myself drawn in. The characters seemed realistic. The plot was well paced. There isn't as much dialogue as I usually like to see, but that did not even occur to me until I was sitting down to write the review. The story as a whole just flows very nicely. I found this story to be entertaining both when it was arousing and when it wasn't. My subjective opinion is that this is an excellent story. |
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