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Title |
Sharing a Bed for the Night |
Author |
J. Boswell |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Inc |
Length |
5,200 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Story |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
9 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Excellent |
Summary |
Rocky, Roxanne Chase, visits Denny, her son, on his 21st birthday. |
Commentary |
I found this story to be very arousing. The
author does a wonderful job building up
to the sex. He does not jump into it from
the get-go. Instead he has written a story
which ends with sex, instead of being
nothing but sex. Its not that hard to see
where the story is leading, which can be
bad, but the author nudges it along, rather
than shove it in the reader's face, which is
good. I think this is a very well written story. There was an occasional misspelled word. There were also three places in the text where a sentence is repeated for no apparent reason. While these errors could have been avoided, they occurred infrequently enough that they did not detract from my reading pleasure. I like how the author plotted the story. It has a nice, natural feeling flow. I like the main character, who is the only one you really get to know, and the tone the author has given her. This is definitely an A-list story, and I have given it an Excellent. |
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