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Title |
Eight Is Enough: And Two's Not Bad, Either |
Author |
Uncle Mike |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, Teen, Inc |
Length |
8,900 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Arousal Factor |
High |
Story Factor |
High |
Summary |
Tommy is fourteen years old and Elizabeth, his sister, is fifteen years old. What begins with a fairly innocent kiss develops into much more. |
Commentary |
This is stroke material, but it is well written
stroke material. The story is based on the
television program "Eight is Enough". Unlike
Tommy and Elizabeth, the other characters
from the show only make token
appearances. What makes this story work for me is that the author seems to have injected a bit of reality into it. Tommy and Elizabeth do not have tons of opportunities to get together; their large family tends to get in the way. I also like the pace of the story. It does not begin with brother and sister in the sack, but rather works up to it. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |