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Title

Sharadzi

Author

Rosemerry

Story Code(s)

F/M

Length

2,900 words

Rating

Very Good

Arousal Factor

Average

Story Factor

High

Summary

Sharadzi is a genetically engineered concubine. She loves her work, but the computer attached to her brain restricts her freedom.

Commentary

I like the way the author builds this story up. She gives the reader bits and pieces, here and there. I like the technique and I think she uses it very effectively.

The sex is hot, but the story is about more than just sex.

The end mystified me. I suppose I should have seen it coming. At the same time I feel as though I missed something.

ASSM Link(s)

Part 1 (of 1)