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Title |
Beachbum |
Author |
Losgud |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
2,200 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Arousal Factor |
High |
Story Factor |
Average |
Summary |
A man tells his wife about their trip to the beach. |
Commentary |
This story is told in the second person. It is longer on arousal
than it is on story. There is a certain amount of tenderness to this story. I really enjoyed the intimacy the author has created between the narrator and his wife. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |