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Title

A Roll of the Dice

Author

Bernadette

Story Code(s)

F/F

Length

4,500 words

Rating

Very Good

Summary

Lee travels to Las Vegas to meet Margaret, a woman she met on the internet.

Commentary

This story is very well put together. I like all the little details that the author includes. It is about more than just sex.

Lee is a woman who is trapped between taking a step forward and living in the past; living her life as someone else wants her to.

At times, it was hard to follow where the story was leading. I think this is because the narrator seems torn between living her life as she sees fit and living it for someone else, whether that be Margaret or her mother.

ASSM Link(s)

Part 1 (of 1)