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Title |
A Roll of the Dice |
Author |
Bernadette |
Story Code(s) |
F/F |
Length |
4,500 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
Lee travels to Las Vegas to meet Margaret, a woman she met on the internet. |
Commentary |
This story is very well put together. I like all the little details that the author includes. It is about more than just sex. Lee is a woman who is trapped between taking a step forward and living in the past; living her life as someone else wants her to. At times, it was hard to follow where the story was leading. I think this is because the narrator seems torn between living her life as she sees fit and living it for someone else, whether that be Margaret or her mother. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |